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Old 05-01-2007, 05:45 PM
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I was gonna post this on Congress's website, but they're like...9 DOLLAH PLZ B4 U POST IT!!!11 so I typed it all out for nothing...Could you see if anything is wrong with it? (grammar, spelling, personal bias, hints of my age, etc.)

HERE IT G0EZ
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Old 05-02-2007, 06:29 AM
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I was gonna post this on Congress's website, but they're like...9 DOLLAH PLZ B4 U POST IT!!!11 so I typed it all out for nothing...Could you see if anything is wrong with it? (grammar, spelling, personal bias, hints of my age, etc.)

HERE IT G0EZ
soon as it comes through the pending thing I will read it.
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Old 05-02-2007, 11:31 AM
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Me too pal...
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Old 05-02-2007, 07:18 PM
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It has to go through pending?
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Old 05-02-2007, 07:19 PM
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It has to go through pending?
yup our own little red tape LOL
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Old 05-02-2007, 07:34 PM
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There are still pending images from October of 05. Good luck with getting that paper through.
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Old 05-03-2007, 07:13 AM
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I will go through and look and check the pending stuff. I have read your essay and I like it. I would however think about your wording in the first paragraph. It reads like "thousands of Americans flood across our borders." I would write it as thousands of illegal aliens flood across our borders. Other wise the subject matter is going to be confused.
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Definately, If they were American, they would be legal, and there would be no problem.
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Old 05-03-2007, 07:31 AM
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Have a look boys. I have approved the document and you can now read it. I recommend opening it with word.
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I would take out the whole ďnational IdentityĒ tidbit, seems a bit biggoted. American was built on the sweat and tears of Immigrants. Immigration is good when itís legal and the employers are required to pay minimum wage. That allows Americans to compete for those jobs, because currently, An American, who is required by law to be paid minimum, canít compete with an Immigrant who will work for $2.50 an hour. Making the legal process easier to navigate will make sure that these workers pay social security and taxes. We canít however, have 5 million come in a year as that would over crowd urban areas.
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